poetry from the heart

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poetry from the heart

Postby thinkingofhim on Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:13 pm

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Everything I Had

Everything thought i ever had
was because you put it there
Every memory I ever had
was becuase of the time we shared
Every dream i ever had
was because you were on my mind
Everytime i was happy
was because you were so kind
Every time i was mad
was because you crossed the line
All the love i ever gave
was because i thought you cared
All the feelings i ever had
I decided to share!
Now Its All Gone!
Now its all you I blame
because you loving me is only what you claimed
Now i guess I should leave you behind me
whats got me is
you never bothered to apologize
just hit-and run and push me to the side
Im not gonna let you destroy me
and force me to hide
but i will admit
you made me cry
Now ill never have one heart beat to give again
it was ripped in two
when our love came to an end!
dans gal 4 always
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Re: poetry from the heart

Postby thinkingofhim on Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:16 pm

this poem was written a  few years ago so it probably isnt that good but it is the only one that i am willing to submit at the time, after i see the reweiws on this one i will submit the others i have written.    Nikki
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Re: poetry from the heart

Postby Will on Fri Oct 21, 2005 9:44 pm

The writer is right on the money for alot of us.  I think it's pretty universal.  We've all given every part of ourselves completely to one peson and been burned for it.  That's why it's so hard to trust anyone anymore.

Yes, there were happy moments and wonderful dreams, but they all turned into nightmares over time.  Time has a way of doing things like that.  Thanks for sharing this poem.  I hope you're willing to share more.  This was a great portrait of young love.

Thank you.

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Re: poetry from the heart

Postby dying_heart on Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:55 am

this pain is just too real theres just too much tat time cant earase. wen u cried i wood wipe away all of ur tears wen you scream i'd fight away all of ur fears, i held ur hand threw all of these years.
my tears turn to blood
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